Cousins over
In the weekends My cousin came over to My house and we were playing tag and I was having too much Fun. The next day we went to the shop and we go some lollies and we ate them all in one day Overall we had so much fun I loved having Taina over. I hope you like what I have written for you guys tonight. I am glad that she did come over in the weekends.
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ReplyDeleteHi Karli I am Mehakpreet and I am a year 6 from Papakura central school
ReplyDeleteI Love how you wrote what you did and how you ate lots of lollies in one day which is surprising how much did you lollies did you eat? I like how you described and said "I was having too much fun"
Next time you could tell us a little more about what you did at you cosines how because I am really keen to know. You could also write little bit bit more about what you did
From Mehakpreet